My first C4K for November was Niuma.
Niuma Post:
What if I had a Super Powers
Once upon a time there was a boy call Megamind and he saw a little rock on the floor. It was shining in his face and it looked like a baby blue colour. I walked over to pick it up and it changed me into a big Megamind hulk. I felt very strong, fast, powerful and I could fly very fast like a speeding rocket.
As I was flying I saw a big gangs blowing up the town then I zoomed straight down and punched the ground with one hit and everything was flying like a rock around in the road. Then the gangs look at Big Megamind Hulk and then the gangs started shooting him. Big Megamind Hulk was bulletproof and he start walking towards them so all the gangs start running away from
him. Then Big Megamind Hulk ran fast to catch them,they all went to jail then the police say thank you for helping us and saving our town It ok.
My Comment:
Very Interesting and thoughtful post! I really enjoyed reading this post. There are a few words spelled wrong but other than that wonderful post! Keep up the great work!
My second C4K for November was Skye's story about big bird.
Skye's Video:
My Comment:
Hello Skye
My name is Chelsea Hadley from the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed watching your video. You did a great job!! Keep up the good work!
Hello! Great job in giving out the compliments to each child. I am sure it makes them feel good.
ReplyDeleteOne thing though,the post to Niuma lacked your name, school and class etc.. I know they would want to know who you are and why you are looking at their blogs.
Other than that, I believe they would of been happy to read your comments.